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| tiny steps | 23 Wish You Were Her | 1/5 | on 71029 | at punding.com |

Title: 23 Wish You Were Her

Series: Tiny steps

Writer: P E Leody

SYNOPIS: A GIFT GIVES JANDY A CHANCE TO RECAPTURE HER PAST

PAGE 1


Jandy and Gornado (the seal) swim in the shallow waters off the coast of Cook's island

Caption: EVEN WHEN YOU'RE TRYING TO SAVE THE WORLD THERE ARE DAYS OFF

GORNADO: HONK HONK

JANDY: SWIMMING IS THE MOST COMPLETE EXERCISE, BUT IT DOESN'T EXPLAIN WHY YOU SEALS ARE SO FAT


Palm trees on the island vibrate

Caption: KERVOOGA, KERVOOGA


Close up of Cook

COOK: SECURITY SYSTEMS HAVE BEEN BREACHED, HEAD IMMEDIATELY FOR THE INNER SANCTUM


Jandy and Cook stare out at the seas where an ominous approaching object can be seen

JANDY: WHAT IS IT?

COOK: HOW DO I KNOW I'M BLIND

JANDY: WHAT DOES YOUR HIGHLY SPECIALISED EARLY WARNING SYSTEM THINK IT IS?


The shadow flies past the island dropping a package that floats down on a parachute. The package is the equivalent size of an LP record

COOK: A THREAT, A MAJOR OMINOUS THREAT, NOW

PAGE 2


Jandy handles the package and waves it in front of Gornado

JANDY: AN ORDINARY PACKAGE LOOKS LIKE THE POSTMAN IS MAKING HOUSE CALLS


Jandy puts the package down between the electronics in the room

JANDY: GORNADO CAN'T SMELL ANYTHING SUSPICIOUS

COOK: HE'S A SEAL, HE JUST SNIFFS FOR FISH


Close up of Jandy

JANDY: CAN WE SCAN IT, PEEK INSIDE BEFORE OPENING, XRAY, INFRA RED, PSYCHIC HANDS ON THINGY


Cook accesses computer

COOK: COULD DO BUT IF IT POSES ANY DANGER TO US, IT'S ALREADY BREACHED THE INNER SANCTUM, MAY AS WELL OPEN IT


Cook hold up the contents a huge shiny disk

COOK: UNBELIEVABLE IT'S A PCM HOLOGRAPHIC DISK, ACTUALLY A PCM+R, YOU CAN WRITE TO IT ONCE AND IT'S STILL BLANK

PAGE 3


Cook checks the PCM disk on his laptop

COOK: YOUR SON SAYS HE FOUND IT IN A CAR BOOT SALE, THINKS YOU MAY BE ABLE TO MAKE USE OF IT. WHICH PART OF THIS DOESN'T SOUND SUSPICIOUS


Jandy is on the balcony of the island's residence looking out. POV from the sea looking in at her

JANDY: A CHANCE TO MAKE ANOTHER PCM HOLOGRAPHIC RECORDING OF A PERSON. THE ONE HE ALREADY HAVE OF MUNTY IS YEARS OLD AND HAS HIS TWISTED MEMORIES BEFORE HE BECAME MY HUSBAND.


Close up of Munty

JANDY: EVERY TIME WE SWITCH HIM ON HE STARTS FROM THE SAME IGNORANCE AND WE HAVE TO BRING HIM UP TO DATE


The old hologram boots up

JANDY: WATCH HIS HEART BREAK LOSING KAGLE, THEN MEND WITH GETTING ME


Scene of the small island in the ocean at night

JANDY: THEN SHATTERED IRREPARABLY AS HE REALISES HE'S ALREADY DEAD IN THE PRESENT WORLD

PAGE 4


Jandy and Cook together address Munty. POV looking at the pair

JANDY: PLEASE BE PATIENT MUNTY WE HAVE A LONG AND SORROWFUL STORY TO RELATE


Munty's holograph

JANDY: ... INDUSTRIAL AGENT... KAGLE.. BREAKING... FATHER.. EXPERIMENTS... MEMORY LOSS


Close up of Jandy and Munty

JANDY: ... NURSE.. RECOVERY... MARRIAGE... DOCTOR... SON... ASYLUM.. DEATH


Jandy hands Munty her photograph album

JANDY: THIS PHOTO ALBUM CONTAINS THE WHOLE RECORD


A finger presses the record button

JANDY: SO THAT BRINGS US UP TO DATE, IF YOU'VE NO MORE QUESTIONS WE ARE GOING TO RECORD YOU AS YOUR MIND IS IN THIS STATE

PAGE 5


Cook views the 2 PCM disks

COOK: SO HERE WE HAVE AN IGNORANT AGENT PROVOCATEUR AND ON THE OTHER DISK A CONTENTED PROTECTIVE EDUCATED HUSBAND, WHO YOU FORGOT TO TELL IS DEAD


One of the disks bounces out of Cook's hand and smashes on the floor

Sfx: KERSMASH

COOK: WHOOPS

JANDY: WHICH ONE HAVE YOU BROKEN?


Close up of the new Munty

MUNTY: SO DID IT WORK,? IS THIS FIRST PLAYBACK OR THE HUNDREDTH?


Munty looks out at the sea across the balcony. POV from inside the room

COOK: LOOKS LIKE YOU GOT YOUR HUSBAND BACK

JANDY: I SHOULD FEEL ELATED, BUT I FEEL LIKE WE'VE MADE A TERRIBLE MISTAKE


Close up of Munty outside smirking

MUNTY: MANAGED TO CONCEAL MY TRUE FEELINGS, DESTROY THE OLDER PCM RECORDING OF ME, THIS WORLD HAS CHANGED IN MY ABSENCE AND IT DIDN'T ASK MY PERMISSION

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