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Title: Lucky Charm

Series: Chronicle

Writer: P E Leody

SYNOPIS: EARTH IS AN INTELLECTUAL PARADISE UNKNOWINGLY RUN BY ALIEN MASTERS. HUNDREDS OF GENERATIONS OF RUMOURS AND TOIL GIVE MAN A CHANCE TO GO BACK ION TIME TO CHANGE THIS

PAGE 1


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Jon and Pete working like happy chapppies in a packing factory. They are dressed in grey none de script smocks

JON: I BELIEVE THE CURRENT SOCIAL POLITICAL CLIMATE DOES NOT FAVOUR PROPORTIONAL REPRESENTATION


2 
A large bell rings and Jon and Pete finish their work

PETE: THAT IS PRECISELY THE POINT. AN OUTSIDE STOCHASTIC PROCESS THAT WHEN INVERTED SUSTAINS ITSELF


3 
Jon gathers his personal things from his locker, he does not change clothes he wears the same drab ones home

JON: SO HOW CAN WE BE SURE OF THE ECONOMIC RAMIFICATIONS WITH ONLY INDEPENDENT MODELLING


4 
Jon sits on the underground train home he has good posture and keeps himself to himself

PETE: SEE YA TOMORROW


5 
Jon walks to his apartment bloc, he is in a line of people all walking at the same pace the same distance apart

JON: CHEERS MATE


6 
Jon curls up to watch the TV the apartment is empty bar the TV which is a huge central fixing

TV: TONIGHT WE DEDICATE A WHOLE NIGHTS VIEWING TO THE NOTION THAT THREATENS TO TEAR OUR POLITICAL SYSTEM APART, EGALITARIAN POLITICAL REFORM


7 
Two aliens in front of a huge bank of screens each showing the reverse view of the TV i.e. loads of viewers staring at the screen

ALIEN 1: LOCK DOWN INSTANTIATED... COMPLETE

ALIEN 2: HUMAN CURFEW IN FULL EFFECT

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1 
Jon and Pete working like happy chappies in a packing factory. They are dressed in grey none de script smocks. The large bell rings

JON: I FEEL THEIR POINTS WERE WELL ARGUED BUT LACK THE FORESIGHT NEEDED FOR IMPLEMENTATION


2 
Jon leaves and goes to the toilet stalls

JON: EXCUSE ME I REALLY NEED THIS


3 
A flush toilet

JON: ALL THIS INTELLECTUAL STIMULATION COUPLED WITH HARD TEDIOUS WORK LEAVES ME PREOCCUPIED


4 
The toilet slides to one side to reveal a hole in the wall

JON: I REALLY NEED A GOOD DUMP


5 
Joe crawls through the hole

JON: OF THE BRAIN AND GET SOME REAL PHYSICAL ACTION


6 
A large room Joe is met by his father Andy

ANDY: IT IS FINISHED, A HUNDRED GENERATIONS HAVE WORKED ON THIS IN FEUDAL SECRECY DURING THEIR LUNCH HOUR


7 
A time machine built around a large Victorian bath an large shower head

ANDY: YOUR TIME MACHINE AWAITS

PAGE 3


1 
A vortex appears on a barren planet

Sfx: KERWHORP


2 
The time travelling bath appears on the barren planet

JON: NO IT'S IMPOSSIBLE. EARTH WAS A PLACE OF MAGNIFICENT BEAUTY NOT A BARREN WASTELAND


3 
As the sun comes out Jon walks across the barren lands in his home made space suit

JON: I BELIEVE THE TALES THAT WERE PASSED DOWN TO MY FATHER OF HOW THE HUMAN RACE WAS HELD IN INTELLECTUAL SLAVERY


4 
The sun shines brighter and Jon stumbles ever onward through the barren lands

JON: AND HOW WE ONCE WERE MASTERS OF OUR DESTINY, BUT IT SEEMS IT WAS ALL FAIRY TALES


5 
On the top of a barren hill Jon looks down to see a lone US diner, he removes his helmet

JON: COUGH, I CAN BREATHE FREELY, I MADE IT, IS THIS? THIS IS EARTH


6 
Jon wanders into the bar a stranger turns to look

STRANGER: AN ENTRANCE LIKE THAT DESERVES A DRINK

JON: I'VE ONLY GOT THIS PASSED DOWN THE GENERATIONS


7 
Joe pushes an dollar across the bar to the stranger

STRANGER: IS IT LUCKY I NEED SOME LUCK?

JON: IT GAVE ME SAFE PASSAGE

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1 
Joe appears in Trafalgar Square it is empty

JON: HERE IT IS RUMOURED THE UNSEEN MASTERS WERE FIRST... ERHH... SEEN


2 
An alien craft lands thousands of people flock to see it

JON: THEY TENTATIVELY LANDED A LONE SCOUT CRAFT


3 
People running towards the craft

JON: PEOPLE FLOCKED WITH OPEN ARMS TO THE NEW TOURISTS


4 
People fleeing from the craft

JON: TIL THE PURE UGLY EVIL OF THE SPECIES WAS REVEALED


5 
The upturned destroyed alien craft

JON: THE HUMAN RACE TOOK ON IT'S OWN DESTINY FROM THAT DAY


6 
Many alien craft approach Earth

JON: THEN THE SOON TO BE MASTERS CAME IN FULL FORCE


7 
The Earth under attack

JON: AND WE STOOD NO CHANCE

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1 
A transmitter radiates into space

JON: AM FEELING DISORIENTATED THAT DIDN'T HAPPEN OR DID IT?


2 
The alien scout craft approaches again in an alternate time line

JON: I REMEMBER NOW WE CONTACTED THE SCOUT CRAFT WHEN IT ARRIVED


3 
A transportation device crackles into life

JON: THEY ENTERED INTO NEGOTIATIONS SENT A LIMO FOR US


4 
A protective dome like structure on the moon

JON: WE MET ON NEUTRAL TERRITORY UNDER A PROTECTIVE DOME


5 
Inside the dome the Earth leader meets with the alien by the flag man has planted on the moon

JON: THEN IT HAPPENED, THE ALIEN GOT SICK


6 
All around the moon all the alien crafts blow up

JON: THE WHOLE FLEET CAUGHT IN AND WAS DESTROYED. THE DISEASE WAS TRACED TO A SOURCE CONTAINING GERMS FROM HUNDREDS OF GENERATIONS


7 
On the flag on the moon the dollar from page three is gaffa taped to the flag pole

Caption: A VERY LUCKY COIN PASSED FROM ONE TRAVELLER TO ANOTHER ACROSS TIME

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