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Title: 07 Freefall

Series: Oad

Writer: P E Leody

SYNOPIS

PAGE 1


Hale wanders down the road. It can be seen to terminate in a turning circle but a fence


Hale rests at the fence staring into the abyss


An aerial shot to show Hale is standing by the fence of a huge cliff

HOLMES: SAVED YOUR LIFE.


Holmes grabs Hale from behind, joking

HOLMES: BUT SERIOUSLY WE'VE A SPARE KNAPSACK IF YOU'RE GOING TO JOIN US PLUMMETERS


Hale puts on his knapsack. By the fence a large bunny rests, Holmes' compatriots stand by chatting

HOLMES: HURRY UP THE BUNNY'S ABOUT TO BOLT


The same shot as before but the bunny has leapt over the fence

HOLMES: COME ON WE'RE UP, PLUMMETERS AHOY


Hale jumps with the others blindly over the fence after the rabbit

HOLMES: THE SACKS A LAST RESORT, YOU'LL KNOW WHEN TO USE IT. THE TRICK IS TO THEN DEFY THE TEMPTATION. THEN ALL WILL BE SORTED.

PAGE 2


Falling are 2 plummeters and Hale is following them there is approaching a branch

HOLMES: BRANCH AHOY


Hale grabs the branch and it arrests his fall;

HOLMES: YOU'RE MEANT TO AVOID IT NOT GRAB IT, YOU'LL NEVER REACHED THE CORRECT ACCELERATION


Hale lets go as the branch springs back and he lands on a small plateau where the rabbit is running

HOLMES: OH I APOLOGISE, NICE PLAY


Hale has a standoff with the rabbit

HOLMES: GO ON GET CLOSURE

RABBIT: EEEK


The rabbit launches off the plateau to start falling again

HOLMES: BAD LUCK HE'S A SLIPPERY ONE THAT ONE

PAGE 3


Hale slices through the air in a streamline shape closing in on the bunnies back paws


Hales grasps the bunny in a body hug

HOLMES: NICE USE OF THE BLIND SPOT


They land on a pointy three that separates them as hale desperate tries to hold on, Holmes watches nearby

Sfx: KERASH

HOLMES: KEEP HOLD


The tree gets to bushy and Hale I forced to let go

RABBIT: EEEK

HOLMES: TWICE GONE THAT'S WHAT SOME WOULD CALL CARELESS


Hale is knocked senseless and titters of the tree falling unconscious

HOLMES: CONCENTRATE, WAKEY WAKEY

PAGE 4


The bunny is falling towards his den on the valley floor, plummeters are following but hale falls lifeless

HOLMES: HE'S ALMOST HOME LOOK SHARP


The rabbit disappears down the hole but the plummeters don't quite make it splattering on the floor, Hale is still falling lifeless

HOLMES: ABOUT NOW YOU COULD WAKE UP


Hale is very close to hitting the floor Holmes is nearby

HOLMES: GOOD KNOWING YOU ALL


Hale is stirred by the word

HALE: NOT NOT ANOTHER GOODBYE


HOLMES: IT DIDN'T HAVE TO END THIS WAY

PAGE 5


Hale righted crosses his arms

HALE: THE SACKS A LAST RESORT


Hale pulls a ripcord form the knapsack

HALE: I'LL KNOW WHEN TO USE IT


A chute opens an Hale stops inches from the ground

HALE: THE TRICK IS TO THEN DEFY THE TEMPTATION


A huge up draught catches Hale and blows him back up the valley walls

HALE: THEN ALL WILL BE SORTED


Hale lands softy on a different side of the valley

HALE: GOING UP


Hale repacks his shoot and walks on up the road

HALE: I'LL TAKE THAT THOUGHT WITH ME UP THE ROAD

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