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Title: 02 Stall
Series: Oad
Writer: P E Leody
SYNOPIS:
PAGE 1
This explains how the stranger gets his name
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Long short a single road in the middle of nowhere nothing is around
2
Panning in on frame 1 a figure can be seen on the road
3
Panning in on frame 2 the figure can be seen to be Hale, a mop toped stranger dressed on in a black plastic bag
4
Hale approaches the back of a small wooden stall from the road there is a huge arrow on it indicating he show investigate
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Hale views the front of the stall, it is a Kumquat stand staffed by two young twins Tracy (the talker) and Haley (the quiet one). There names are large circular badges
TRACY: WATCHA MAN
HALEY: HIA
HALEY: ! COUGH!
PAGE 2
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From behind the girls Hale stands nervously coughing
TRACY: WANNA DRINK OF KUMQUAT MISTER
2
Hale approaches the stall, penniless and having not spoken for sometime hoarse
HALE: ! COUGH!
HALEY: FIRST ONE'S ON THE HOUSE
3
Hale drinks as Tracy watches
TRACY: YOU'RE ONE PARCHED GEEZER
HALE: THANK YOU, UNFORTUNATELY I HAVE NOTHING TO OFFER YOU
4
The girls lead Hale down a windy path from the stall to a Kumquat tree. The ground has strange shadow craters in them
TRACY: WE'LL TRADE YOU, MAN WITH NO NAME
HALE: I HAVE NOTHING
HALEY: BUT YOU ARE TALL!
PAGE 3
1
In the left half of the page a tree grows and spreads it's branches right. Hale is pictured in various parts of climbing the tree and it's branches whist the twins watch
HALE: I DON'T REMEMBER IF I'M SCARED OF HEIGHTS
TRACY: IT'LL ALL COME BACK TO YOU
2
The twins carry a full basket of their harvest on their heads, Hale carries two with outstretched arms
TRACY: WE'LL FEAST TONIGHT
HALEY: A BUMPER HARVEST
3
Hale trips in one of the small craters and spills his load
4
Haley pedals a strange contraption that Tracy uses to squeeze the juice out of the Kumquat
TRACY: WATCH YOUR STEP
HALEY: HE HA
5
The trip had brought Hale face to face with a crater he examine sit
HALE: SHE WOULD HAVE LIKED THIS
PAGE 4
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A huge picture of freshly squeezed juice sits on the stall glinting in the sun
TRACY: TIS MAKES IT ALL WORTH IT
2
The three share a glass, the suns dims
TRACY: JUST IN TIME, CHEERS MISTER
HALEY: CHEERS
3
The sun goes dark and the area is subjected to a bombardment of small meteorites falling to earth
Sfx: KERCRASH, KERPLODE
4
Hale stands with Tracy looking at the dead body of Haley whose been hit by a meteorite. The suns shines again
HALE: DON'T LOOK TRACY
TRACY: NO PROBLEMS MATE, IT WAS JUST HER TIME
PAGE 5
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Hale kneels and starts to rip a section of his bag clothing around the neck
HALE: NO ONE DESERVES THAT
TRACY: THAT THE WAY IT IS
HALE: SHE WOULD HAVE LIKED THIS
TRACY: STAY AND SHOW ME
2
Hale passes the ripped plastic to Tracy
HALE: HERE I'LL TRADE YOU THIS
TRACY: I ONLY HAVE JUICE TO SWAP AND YOU EARNED THAT
3
Hale takes the name badge off Haley that has been eroded to read Hale
HALE: I'LL TAKE THIS AS MY FIRST NEW MEMORY
TRACY: I DON'T WANT TO FORGET HER
4
The stall full of jugs of Kumquat aid
TRACY: PLEASES MISTER HELP ME REMEMBER
5
Hale and Tracy stand by a grave, Tracy wears the plastic as an armband
TRACY: SHE WOULD HAVE LIKED THIS
6
Full shot of Hale leave
HALE: IF YOU NEED TO FIND ME JUST FOLLOW THE ROAD
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Head shot of disturbed Hale, Tracy shouts after him
TRACY: GOOD BYE KIND STRANGER
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Body shot of Hale walking, his clothes now have a neckline from the ripped and he proudly display the badge with 'Hale' on it
TRACY: MAN WITHOUT A NAME
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