| chronicle | Enfin Terrible | 1/5 | on 31013 | at punding.com |
Title: Enfin Terrible
Series: Chronicle
Writer: P E Leody
SYNOPIS:
PAGE 1
1
A large explosion in space propels Colwyn to the front of the frame as a shadow too large to see the complete outline
Sfx: KERBOOM, KABLANG
2
Pulling back from the scene a salvage ship 'The Copperfield' suspiciously like the Titanic (in space) edges in to the frame as a small Colwyn can be seen thrusting, unwillingly to a nearby planet
Sfx: KAZOOM, KERWHISH
3
The Copperfield has lain anchor (in space) on a nearby asteroid, Lyssa in a space suit (as he will be throughout the story until the final frames) rows a lifeboat towards Colwyn's unconscious form
LYSSA: DO HANG ON IN THERE, DON'T WASTE YOUR BREATH SCREAMING
PAGE 2
1
Lyssa has picked up and rowed Colwyn back to the Copperfield, he is winching the lifeboat back aboard
LYSSA: WE'LL GET YOU CHECKED OUT, THEN RESOLVE THE DELICATE SALVAGE SITUATION
2
From the Copperfield's bridge the source of the explosion in frame 1 can be seen. It is a large freighter now in many pieces
LYSSA: YOU WERE LUCKY TO ESCAPE THAT ONE MY FRIEND
3
The pair set off again for the planet
LYSSA: WHILST THE SHIP MAINTAINS ORBIT IT'S NOT CONSIDERED BROKEN. BUT ANYTHING ON THAT BARREN PLANET IS NOW OFFICIALLY MINE.
4
Lyssa lands on the planet near a huge foreign looking ship that is badly damaged
LYSSA: BLIMEY SOMETHING'S VANDALISED THAT GOOD AND PROPER
5
Lyssa investigates the ship's cargo area he finds seed pod-egg looking objects
LYSSA: UHM SEEMS TO HAVE BEEN INTERRUPTED MID DELIVERY
6
Exploring the ship fins lattice floors eaten away by some kind of acid
LYSSA: THEY'VE MUST HAVE HAD A CROOK BUNCH OF MECHANICS
7
Lyssa finds a breakfast table slightly unruly but stacked with food
LYSSA: THEY DESERVE WHAT THEY GOT, NOT HAVING A HEARTY BREAKFAST
8
Lyssa finds a deserted circular sleep chamber
LYSSA: MUCKY PUPS DIDN'T EVEN MAKE THEIR BEDS
PAGE 3
1
Lyssa treks towards a damaged settlement, Colwyn is not interested and stays back. A High tech space assault vehicle lies in ruins
LYSSA: CARELESS DRIVING …
2
Some makeshift graves
LYSSA: … COSTS LIVES
3
A satellite dish and an attached mobile computer flap in the wind
LYSSA: HELL OF A WAY TO COME JUST TO SET UP AN ANSWERING MACHINE
4
A high tech ground assault vehicle lies in ruins
LYSSA: OBVIOUSLY THIS SERVICE TERMINATED HERE
5
The settlement complex lies in flaming ruins
LYSSA: OBVIOUSLY IT'S NOT 'TERRAFORMING IN BLOOM WEEK'
6
Inside what remains of the complex Lyssa finds a wrecked laboratory with a bed
LYSSA: UHM MUST BE OUT OF OPENING HOURS
7
A steaming tripod mounted gun surrounded almost covered in a heap of spent shells
LYSSA: DON'T SEE MANY OF THOSE THESE DAYS, THERE'RE SPECIAL EDITIONS
PAGE 4
1
Lyssa abseils down a rope past a turning waterwheel the feeds an underground canal
LYSSA: BACKUP GENERATORS ARE STILL FUNCTIONING
2
Lyssa finds a load of weapons taped together
LYSSA: IF YOU DON'T TAKE THAT TAPE OFF OVERNIGHT IT'LL NEVER COME OFF.
3
Lyssa enters a huge area that has an exoskeleton type loading machine and it is filled with a huge queen insect like insect
LYSSA: THIS MUST BE THE THRONE ROOM
4
Lyssa stares at the huge queen's head that stirs
LYSSA: ASTOUNDING YOU TOOK ON THE FORCE OF MANKIND'S MIGHTIEST AND YOU OUT SURVIVED THEM
PAGE 5
1
Lyssa and a recovered Colwyn walk out of lift in a deep secret military complex in space suits
LYSSA: AND ALL THIS IS POSSIBLE THANKS TO YOU BEING RESCUED
2
The queen insect is isolated in a huge tank that the 2 survey form a balcony
LYSSA: IF I HAD FOUND YOUR ALIEN LIFE SIGNS WE'D NEVER HAVE FOUND THIS PRIZE
3
Lyssa passes through a curtain
LYSSA: YOU ARE THE ONLY EYE WITNESS
4
Lyssa draws the curtains for privacy
LYSSA: THE ONLY VIRTRIOL FLUID POWERED EYE WITNESS
COLWYN: WHAT!
5
Lyssa kills Colwyn with a swipe from a blunt instrument
COLWYN: ARGGH!
6
Lyssa removes his helmet, but this head is not revealed
LYSSA: HOWEVER OUR RACES USES COMPOUND EYES AND THEY SEE EVERYTHING
7
Lyssa approaches the queen bowed- so his head is not visible
QUEEN: THIS TIME THERE WILL BE NO SET BACKS, FROM THEIR OAFISH INCOMPETENT MILITARY
8
Lyssa saluting is revealed to be of the same species as the queen and hence salutes with say 3 arms!
LYSSA: YES YOUR MAJESTY, BIEHN ALONG TIME
PunDing.com/skript/31013
