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Title: Earth Arisen

Series: Chronicle

Writer: P E Leody

SYNOPIS: 

PAGE 1


1 
Close up on Nanny and Jennifer driving their sports car

NANNY: JENNIFER I WOULD LIKE A PLOT PRECIS, 30 WORDS OR LESS


2 
The car is revealed to be a space craft approaching a planet via it docking terminals

JENNIFER: YES NANNY. THE EARTH HAS BEEN UNKNOWINGLY AUCTIONED OFF TO ONE OF 3 NEFARIOUS BUYERS


3 
The car docks at wooden pier like structure in space, the pair disembark

NANNY: SPELL IT

JENNIFER: N E F AR IO US


4 
The pair having fed the parking meter walk towards the immigration centre on the pier

NANNY: GOOD, CONTINUE

JENNIFER: OUR INVESTIGATIONS HAVE LED TO THE HOME OF THE FIRST OF THESE, DR C MICE


5 
The pair walk through the immigration area the whole area is covered in the bearded face of Dr C Mice

NANNY: A POPULAR FELLOW HE IS TOO


6 
Sniffer dogs strain at their leads

JENNIFER: I'M SCARED NANNY


7 
The pair walk past a barrier unchallenged

NANNY: NO NEED TO BE POOKUMS


8 
The pair are suddenly surrounded by pointing gun barrels

Sfx: KERCLICK, KERCLICK, KERCLICK

NANNY: JUST BECAUSE A PLACE IS NOT IN THE GOOD TIFFIN GUIDE … WHOOPS

PAGE 2


1 
The pair are in a sparse cell sitting on a bed suspended from a wall, on another are more pictures of Dr C Mice. The Police Chief talks to them. As an aside Ounce (the mouse) can be seen on the floor

CHIEF: WELL NANNY YOUR CREDENTIALS ARE IMPECCABLE, AND YOUR WARD IS QUITE CHARMING

NANNY: THANK YOU, I DO SO TRY


2 

CHIEF: PERHAPS YOU'D BETTER RETURN AT A MORE PROSPEROUS TIME

JENNIFER: HAS THE RULE OF ANIMAL RIGHT VIOLATING HEAVY HANDED EXTORTIONISTS GRIPPED YOUR PLEASANT LAND?

NANNY: JENNIFER, CURB YOUR ADJECTIVES, WE HAD BEST LEAVE


3 
The pair walk towards the door as the chief sits on the suspended bed

CHIEF: DR MICE HAS BEEN EXONERATED AND HAS TERRA FORMED THIS CULTURAL PLANET FROM NOTHING, BUT IT SEEM STILL SOMEONE IS BENT ON DESTROYING HIM


4 
The pair turn back to talk to the chief just at the edge of the door

CHIEF: WE KNOW LITTLE OF REAL WORLD THINGS, UNLIKE YOUR WELL TRAVELLED SELVES

NANNY: WHAT DO YOU THINK JENNIFER?

JENNIFER: WE'LL START AFTER TIFFIN

PAGE 3


1 
The chief, nanny and Jennifer eat in the police canteen

JENNIFER: SMASHING TIFFIN CHIEF

NANNY: I'VE HEARD THAT AN ATTEMPT WILL BE MADE TO STEAL THE DECADIUM PALM TONIGHT

CHIEF: NO! THAT SYMBOLISES OUR PLANET'S FOUNDING SPIRIT


2 
The three walk through the chief's patch

CHIEF: I'LL AUTHORISE A FULL SCALE STAKEOUT

NANNY: BETTER THE JUST THE ONE VEHICLE WITH US 3


3 
The chief gets some weapons from the armoury

JENNIFER: GUNS?

CHIEF: THEY DON'T WORK IT JUST KEEPS OUR MEN MORE AWAKE IF THEY THINK THEY HAVE A SOMETHING DANGEROUS AROUND


4 
The chief drives the 3 off in a MPV

CHIEF: WE HAVE PLENTY OF GOOD VANS

NANNY: TOO OBVIOUS, THIS WAY WE LOOK LIKE AN INNOCENT FAMILY

JENNIFER: CAN I BE MOTHER

NANNY: MAY BE NEXT TIME


5 
The remaining 4 frames on the page fit together to show the site of the proposed robbery there

CHIEF: HERE WE ARE, I'LL JUST OPAQUE THE WINDOWS AND WE SHOULD SLIP DOWN BEHIND THE WINDOW'S LEVEL


6 
Nanny box out on the scene

NANNY: NONSENSE, JENNIFER GRAB THE HAMPER, CHIEF OPEN THE BACK DOOR LETS PICNIC


7 
Jennifer box out

JENNIFER: WHO IS THIS BAD MAN?


8 
Box out of Chief

CHIEF: HES COMMITTED ANNOYING OFFENCES, NEVER HARMED ANYONE JUST MAKES THE WHOLE TOWN JITTERY

PAGE 4


1 
Jennifer sleeps resting on Nanny

NANNY: I'LL TAKE FIRST WATCH


2 
There is movement in the scene


3 
Chief not looking outside

CHIEF: NONSENSE THIS IS WHAT I LIVE FOR THE THRILL OF THE CHASE

JENNIFER: THERES THE MAN, THERE


4 
The three burst out of the van

NANNY: COME ON

CHIEF: I'LL TAKE THE NORTH

NANNY: I'LL TAKE THE EAST, JENNIFER

JENNIFER: I KNOWN NANNY I'LL CLEAN UP THE VAN.


5 
There follows a series of frames of the disguised man being chased unit Jennifer bored gets out and chases after him


6 
Jennifer pushes the man against a wall as the other join her.

NANNY: WELL CAUGHT POOKUMS, I HOPE YOU FINISHED YOUR CHORES FIRST

JENNIFER: YES NANNY

NANNY: GOOD GIRL

CHIEF: PUFF PANT

PAGE 5


1 
Jennifer is tying up the man's hands

JENNIFER: OUT THE RABBIT HOLE AROUND THE TREE, DOWN THE RABBIT HOLE


2 
The chief leads the man away.

NANNY: NICE BOWLINE

CHIEF: GOTCHA, I'M THE CHIEF OF POLICE AND I'VE HAD MY TIFFIN


3 
Nanny and Jennifer watch as the man is unmasked to real

CHIEF: NO ONE I KNOW, NANNY?

NANNY: NO


4 
Jennifer finds a bag the man dropped

JENNIFER: MY CHIEF


5 
Jennifer opens the bag to reveal a hairy object

JENNIFER: YOU MUST SEE THIS MASK


6 
The chief pulls the thief's head but nothing comes off

CHIEF: NO THAT HIS TRUE IDENTITY.


7 
Jennifer approaches the thief undoes his knots

JENNIFER: MR BAD MAN, AM I ONES OF THOSE PESKY KIDS


8 
The man puts on his mask

DR C MICE: NO OF COURSE NOT YOU'RE A GEM

CHIEF: DR MICE, I MEAN SIR


9 
The man with the mask is reveal led to be Dr C Mice himself.

DR C MICE: I JUST HAD TO DO IT, ARTISTS ARE SO BORING, BEING PERPETUALLY PLUMP AND BEARDED IS SO BORING I NEEDED A CHALLENGE AND CHANGE


10 
Chief and Dr Mice stand together

JENNIFER: THERE'S NO REASON THE PUBLIC HAS TO KNOW YOU'VE BEEN CAUGHT

CHIEF: CERTAINLY MADE MY LIFE MORE EXCITING

NANNY: SAY YOUR GOOD BYES


11 
The blasts off

JENNIFER: NICE MAN


12 
The car leaves the planet's orbit

NANNY: SHAME HE DIDN'T BUY THE EARTH TOO, WOULD BE A CULTURAL ICON BY NOW.

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