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Title: Prefab Day

Series: Chronicle

Writer: P E Leody

SYNOPIS: 

PAGE 1


1 
Jo a young girl has escaped from her contained living environment into the real world. She emerges through a one way door. She gasps at the sight that unfolds in front of her eyes

JO: ALOYISUS MCMANUS!


2 
As far as she can see the land is filled with similar environments to the one she has just left. Between these structure are honking large rivets attached to a floor, in all a dimpled metal sphere

JO: THE TEACHERS TOLD US THEY HAD ALL THE ANSWERS. IT SEEMS I DIDN'T ASK THE RIGHT QUESTIONS


3 
Jo wanders past her environment in no particular direction. It dwarfs her.

JO: EVEN IF I WANTED TO RETURN THAT DOOR'S TOO HIGH UP AND HAS A NASTY ONE WAY REVOLVING ACTION


4 
The environments are covered in a moss, jo picks some and chews on it whilst walking

JO: I MAY BE STUCK FOR DIRECTIONS BUT THIS LICHEN IS VAGUELY EDIBLE


5 
Jo clasps her hands to her head in terror, a shadow looks like a gun pointing at her

JO: WHAT HAVE I DONE, HOME WAS WARM, SAFE AND INTERESTING. OUT HERE THERES IMPREGNABLE FORTRESS, MOSS BANQUETS AND THE ONLY OTHER PERSON AROUND IS ARMED

PAGE 2

This whole page is split by the arc light that links into the final frame


1 
Jo turns to face her assailant Herman

JO: SORRY, BIT OF A CHLOROPHYLL INDUCED RANT, DON'T YOU HAVE SOME THREATENING TO DO?


2 
Herman looks shocked

HERMAN: ME NO, THIS IS A DIVINER I MADE FROM MY RUCKSACK, IT WILL DETECT ABNORMALITIES, OR IT WOULD DO IF I COULD FORGE ANOTHER ONE


3 
Jo's removes her hair bow

JO: HERE USE THIS I'LL WEAVE MYSELF A WOGGLE

HERMAN: THANKS, LOOSE METAL IS SO SCARCE


4 
Fully equipped, Herman starts divining

HERMAN: THANKS, I WAS BORN HERMAN

JO: YOU HERMAN, ME JO.


5 
Herman's rods are twitching

HERMAN: WHAT EVER IT IS THERE'S A GREAT DISRUPTION IN THIS DIRECTION


6 
Jo watches giggling

JO: SO DO WE FOLLOW IT OR RUN FROM IT?


7 
The two trek past many environments as the night closes in

HERMAN: HAVE YOU BEEN OUTSIDE DURING NIGHT BEFORE?

JO: NO

HERMAN: ITS BEST WE FIND SOME COVER BEFORE THE FIREWORKS START


8 
Jo and Herman shelter behind a large rivet. All the environments are charging up by huge arcs with their neighbours

JO: WHAT ARE THEY DOING

HERMAN: LINE OF SIGHT POWER TRANSFER, AND AS A BYPRODUCT PRODUCING THE OXYGEN WE ARE BREATHING

PAGE 3


1 
The 2 have reached a massive fissure in the metal crust of the sphere it is filled with water flowing a long way down

HERMAN: WE'RE GOING TO HAVE TO WALK AROUND IT


2 
Jo and Herman so some local diving

HERMAN: ITS NOT A RIVER IT’S SOME MINERAL TRANSPORT SYSTEM, MUST RUN UNDER THE LIVING ENVIRONMENTS

JO: LOOKS BROKEN

HERMAN: YES PERHAPS IT'S MEANT TO BE COVERED


3 
A few small shots of the pair on a long trek

JO: THIS METAL IS CORRODED IN PLACES

HERMAN: ITS SEEMS TO BE DECAYING THE NEARER WE GET TO OUR TARGET


4 
A massive mountain pokes out of the surface

HERMAN: THE METAL STRESSES SUGGESTS THE ROCK POKED ITSELF THOROUGH THE LAYER

JO: THE TEACHERS SAID NATURE'S A FORCE THAT CAN'T BE STOPPED.


5 
A few small shots of the pair on a long trek

JO: THERE'S DEFINITELY A BREAKDOWN GOING ON HERE


6 
The pair wander through a few scattered trees

HERMAN: WE'RE GETTING CLOSE TO THE ABNORMALITY

JO: PERHAPS IT'S KICKING UP THESE NON METALLIC OBJECTS


7 
The two stop on the edge of a huge cliff

HERMAN: BINGO

JO: WOW


8 
A reveal shot from the cliff showing a huge ribbed dome a long way away

PAGE 4


1 
The pair have fashioned kite like gliders out of their clothes the have launched them selves off the cliff

JO: DONT FLAP YOUR ARMS JUST KEEP THEM WELL EXTENDED AND TRY TO STAY FLAT

HERMAN: WHERE DO YOU LEARN THIS?

JO: SCHOOL TRIP TO THE NATURAL HISTORY MUSEUM


2 
The 2 land at the base of dome

HERMAN: STUNNING

JO: THERE'S NO GOING BACK NOW


3 
The 2 walk around the huge dome

JO: MUST BE A MILE AROUND

HERMAN: AND THE DIVINERS JUST POINT TO IT'S CENTRE


4 
Herman bangs on the surface

HERMAN: COMPLETELY SOLID AND IMPOSSIBLE TO CLIMB. WE DON'T REALLY WANT TO BE HERE NEAR A MASSIVE CONDUCTOR TONIGHT


5 
Jo finds a door

JO: RATHER CONVENIENTLY THERE'S A DOOR HERE

HERMAN: WHO COULD POSSIBLY BE IT FOR?


6 
The two ascend a massive central structure that is truly awesome

JO: THESE STAIRS APPEAR TO LEAD SOMEWHERE

HERMAN: WHY ELSE BUILD THEM?


7 
The pair reach a small central platform with a central dias

JO: HERMAN LOOK WHAT IT SAYS HERE

HERMAN: WELL, WE MAY AS WELL


8 
On the dias is a big button with press on it jo does it

PAGE 5


1 
A huge arc of power surges across the planet hitting every single environment


2 
The environments lower in to the ground until the planets surface is smooth


3 
There is a huge crack as the metal sphere cracks, the platform that the pair were standing on is thrown clear


4 
The explosion clears and a brand new shiny earth is orbiting in the place of the metal planet


5 
Jo and Herman can see the new arrival from their orbiting platform.

HERMAN: WELL YOU WANTED TO SEE THE WORLD

JO: WELL THAT DID IT

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